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    Author: AshleyDYoung
    ASL Info:    19/F/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 28/33/34
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 500
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    Description:
       These words are not mine, i used the centro form of poetry here and sort of patched these together from other works enjoy here are the rightful owners of these words.
    Longing by Matthew Arnold
    A Dream Within A Dream by Edgar Allan Poe
    Touched by An Angel by Maya Angelou
    A Way To Love To Make Love
    By Lynne Haywood
    Vampire love by Singian


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    Come to me in my dreams, and then
    take this kiss upon the brow.
    Love arrives and in its train come ecstasies.
    I want to make love to your spirit
    by first squeezing and sucking your lips to quench my thirst.
    Kiss me, kiss me, kiss me in the dark of night.




    Submitted on 2011-04-16 00:05:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you blended them well...there is a definite flow...

    doesn't sound like several independent lines...especially the last two are great...

    i am a real maya angelou fan...love her work and the way she reads her poetry..

    i saw gwendolyn brooks a few times...she was a great reader of her work also...a fascinating poet...and a sweet lady...she received the pullitzer prize (first african american ) in the same year i was born...1950---

    have you ever checked her work out? you may really like it..

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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