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    dots Submission Name: Kissdots
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    Author: AshleyDYoung
    ASL Info:    19/F/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 28/33/34
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 516
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 113



    Description:
       Definition of Cinquain Poetry Type and Term

    Cinquain Poetry Type has five lines.

    Line 1 is one word (the title)
    Line 2 is two words that describe the title.
    Line 3 is three words that tell the action
    Line 4 is four words that express the feeling
    Line 5 is one word that recalls the title

    American poet Adelaide Crapsey created the cinquain based on the Japanese haiku


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    dotsKissdots
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    Kiss
    Wet, sloppy
    Enticing, romantic, beautiful
    One un-forgetful night
    Kiss.




    Submitted on 2011-04-16 00:37:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      there is good paradox in this poem....

    things that don't really fit together combining for an interesting effect...the good and bad aspects of a kiss....

    the bookends of the lines enclose the idea of sensuality but temptation within...romantic passion and raw sexuality...

    my only problem was the description...rather than help matters, that takes away from the poem...too much explanation...just let us read and savor this short piece...

    the experience is richer for that.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-09-09 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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