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Rise Against


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
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Words: 77
Class/Type: Poetry /
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something different. :)


Rise Against



don't cry.
there's nothing wrong.

don't see me when I go,
don't sing songs
for someone who's unknown

coloured & dressed like sheep.
dragging feet & chains on the ground
listening to an echo of profound sound
the silence of thousands.

march with strength
march without sympathy
with a sword to cut heads,
and a knife to slit throats.

send the gods a courtesy letter
& let them know,
i'm coming.




Submitted on 2011-04-16 07:51:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is powerful. I read it twice and still don't feel like I've read it enough. I like your style.

Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading.

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| Posted on 2011-04-19 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
  Very nice n very original i cant say im looking at it from your perspective but i can tell you that this is a very...i want to say different?...poem because it can be looked at from many different angles and still have a significant impact on people very well written out i loved it keep up the great posts!ill be looking more into your writes no doubt!
| Posted on 2011-04-17 00:00:00 | by unwantedlove20 | [ Reply to This ]
  I don't know that I get it but I like it. While there seems to be some anger, and even some resignation, the march with strength / march without sympathy lines take me beyond those to a resolve to change through revolution.
| Posted on 2011-04-16 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
  wow this is deep.. i enjoyed this post! i've been reading alot of your writes and you've got talent don't let anyone tell you you otherwise.. keep it comming

Jackz
| Posted on 2011-04-16 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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