there's nothing wrong.
don't see me when I go,
don't sing songs
for someone who's unknown
coloured & dressed like sheep.
dragging feet & chains on the ground
listening to an echo of profound sound
the silence of thousands.
march with strength
march without sympathy
with a sword to cut heads,
and a knife to slit throats.
send the gods a courtesy letter
& let them know,
| This is powerful. I read it twice and still don't feel like I've read it enough. I like your style.|
Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading.
|| Posted on 2011-04-19 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ] || Very nice n very original i cant say im looking at it from your perspective but i can tell you that this is a very...i want to say different?...poem because it can be looked at from many different angles and still have a significant impact on people very well written out i loved it keep up the great posts!ill be looking more into your writes no doubt! ||| Posted on 2011-04-17 00:00:00 | by unwantedlove20 | [ Reply to This ] || I don't know that I get it but I like it. While there seems to be some anger, and even some resignation, the march with strength / march without sympathy lines take me beyond those to a resolve to change through revolution. ||| Posted on 2011-04-16 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ] || wow this is deep.. i enjoyed this post! i've been reading alot of your writes and you've got talent don't let anyone tell you you otherwise.. keep it comming|
|| Posted on 2011-04-16 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ] |