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    Author: Bloodlust86
    ASL Info:    24/F/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 56/49/53
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    Ive just numbed myself
    You no longer matter
    I cant feel the pain
    I'm able to breath

    All I do is cry
    You told me no
    Said I should move on
    You could never love me

    I was lost in the fantasy
    I forgot about reality
    Why couldn't we just pretend
    Just a few more months

    All I think about is you
    The talks we had
    the time we spent
    Now its all gone

    Maybe I will just stay numb

    Forever...




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