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    dots Submission Name: you got a voice.dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 268
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 970
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1661



    Description:
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    dotsyou got a voice.dots
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    when there's nothing left to do
    when you got nothing left to say
    you have to face the music
    and know it will be okay

    when you have the chance to fight
    for something that is right
    why would you just give up
    and let it go?

    (let it go)

    whenever you feel wrong
    or that you don't belong
    you know you got a choice
    you know you got a voice
    whenever you feel used
    or when you feel abused
    you know you got a choice
    you got a voice.


    when they laugh at you
    or push you down
    would you just take it?
    or stand your ground?

    When you have the chance
    to show your dance
    would you let them take it away?

    (take it away)

    whenever you feel wrong
    or that you don't belong
    you know you got a choice
    you know you got a voice
    whenever you feel used
    or when you feel abused
    you know you got a choice
    you got a voice.

    you got a voice.
    you have the right to stand
    don't you want to say
    this is who i am.
    then open up
    show who you are inside
    be proud of yourself
    and show them you're right.

    whenever you feel wrong
    or that you don't belong
    you know you got a choice
    you got a voice
    whenever you feel used
    or when you feel abused
    you know you got a choice
    you got a voice.

    hey, you got a voice.
    (voice)
    Yeah.




    Submitted on 2011-04-17 22:21:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ;) wonderful work! I wish I had this much of a ariting talent! I love it! you did a very doog job! I like the message that i got from this as well.
    | Posted on 2011-04-20 00:00:00 | by DiNoDaNeH | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good, work and theme. Yes we all have a voice and should not feel down troddes, speak up, speak out, but no need to shout, a gentle sound can attract just as much as a loud bang.
    | Posted on 2011-04-18 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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