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    dots Submission Name: a night of conflictdots
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    Author: trinityfinger
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 136/343/209
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsa night of conflictdots
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    and i know that's what i seem to
    desire as a pyramid to tutankhamen's
    eyes lined with kohl and coal covered
    fingers cupping flame to ceiling asking
    asking what all those symbols mean
    when everything can be taken
    out of context and eventualities
    which never quite eventuate
    how you will it
    to be

    and i sold my palms
    to the closest fortune-teller
    willing me empresses and rivers
    and rabbit-holes into my wonderland
    where conversation is a silent motionless
    enterprise of saffron and silk and
    rustling curvatures implying
    bodies dancing and living and laughing
    and searching for the next
    little thing

    and i on the mezzanine and i
    in a hallway circumventing solutions
    mapped out by cartesian thinkers
    by encyclopaedic memories and notes
    and notes and more fruitless misconceptions
    given salt and pepper
    to taste

    i want all of this to crumble
    for hieroglyphics to bathe in
    green currents green melodies
    in silver solutions
    inseeming and insoluble
    inscrutable and enchanting
    you




    Submitted on 2011-04-18 04:38:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      @@c-Street Corner@@
    Brenda Hillman


    There was an angle


    where I went for


    centuries not as a


    self or feature but


    exhaled as a knowing


    brick tradesmen engineered for


    blunt or close recall;


    soundly there, meanings grew


    past a second terror


    finding their way as


    evenings, hearing the peppermint


    noise of sparrows landing


    like spare dreams of


    citizens where abstraction and


    the real could merge.


    We had crossed the


    red forest; we had


    recognized a weird lodge.


    We could have said


    song outlasts poetry, words


    are breath bricks to


    support the guardless singing


    project. We could have


    meant song outlasts poetry.

    | Posted on 2011-04-18 00:00:00 | by AlyRose | [ Reply to This ]


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