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    dots Submission Name: The Fast Lanedots
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    Author: TiaanK
    ASL Info:    37/M/Dancing in the dark
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 22/27/28
    Words: 311
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 772
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    dotsThe Fast Lanedots
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    Racing down highway nowhere

    Breathe, trying to believe

    I'm chasing myself to find relief

    I'm almost there

    Cannonball without a care



    My mind takes a drift

    Exhale, so easy to fail

    Rock solid, oh so frail

    Dark clouds glimpse a rift

    Waiting for me to shift


    Red line, red heat

    More revolutions, more speed

    More, more, more

    Black beast, black heart

    Fear stops where horsepower starts



    The paths twist and twine

    Hyperventilate, a second is too late

    Trying to trust the hands of fate

    Chills speed up my spine

    Fuck it, I'll be fine



    High speed, high stakes

    Traction, dig in for some action

    Ultimate satisfaction, quick reaction

    Leave behind every mistake

    Look in front of you for heaven sake


    Red line, red heat

    More revolutions, more speed

    More, more, more

    Black beast, black heart

    Fear stops where horsepower starts



    Stormy heart, stormy weather

    Raindrops on a spree, I can't see

    Fear firmly grips my knee

    Be tough as leather

    And pull this all together



    Wide open road, calm and cruising

    Beautiful blue, made it through

    Rushing my way to you

    Every corner promises more bruising

    But I have no intention of losing


    Red line, red heat

    More revolutions, more speed

    More, more, more

    Black beast, black heart

    Fear stops where horsepower starts

    More, more, more

    Sweet fumes, sweet talk

    More tense, more torque

    Fully focused, full potential

    Forget regret, the chase so essential





    - Tiaan Koekemoer 2011




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