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    dots Submission Name: In the wind.dots
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    Author: lone_one
    ASL Info:    22/male/alpine-san diego
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 64/53/21
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Broken
    Total Views: 511
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    Bytes: 659



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    dotsIn the wind.dots
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    I'm in the wind, Floating with you
    I'll brave the harsh winds, where ever you go to
    I'll be there when you decend, to gust down and lift you up
    As long as it's you, in the wind i will stay.
    Lets touch the clouds, together as we glide
    Whiping through the heavens, side by side
    I'm your wind keeping you up, through the dark night
    Just know, any storm you will be alright.
    I'm in the wind, as long as you need
    I'm in the wind, holding your hand
    I'll be that wind, when its hard to breath
    I'll stay that wind, till the promise land.




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