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In the wind.

Author: lone_one
ASL Info:    22/male/alpine-san diego
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Class/Type: Deep Thought /Broken
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Wrote this with jaded eyes

In the wind.

I'm in the wind, Floating with you
I'll brave the harsh winds, where ever you go to
I'll be there when you decend, to gust down and lift you up
As long as it's you, in the wind i will stay.
Lets touch the clouds, together as we glide
Whiping through the heavens, side by side
I'm your wind keeping you up, through the dark night
Just know, any storm you will be alright.
I'm in the wind, as long as you need
I'm in the wind, holding your hand
I'll be that wind, when its hard to breath
I'll stay that wind, till the promise land.

Submitted on 2011-04-19 21:27:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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