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    dots Submission Name: Your just theredots
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    Author: lone_one
    ASL Info:    22/male/alpine-san diego
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 64/53/21
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYour just theredots
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    Your just there staring off in space
    And I'm on your planet
    I can reach your heart, but now I can't stand it

    And your just there, playing the field
    I'm in the stands, my heart hasn't healed

    And your just there, tugging my strings
    I paid full price, for your nosebleeds

    And your just there, barely a memory
    You miss my flesh and blood, a human being

    Your still there, I'm at a loss for words
    I hope you die alone




    Submitted on 2011-04-19 22:12:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the two lines:
    your staring into space, I'm on your planet
    your playing the field, I'm in the stands

    very good devices
    | Posted on 2011-04-29 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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