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    dots Submission Name: The Stormdots
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    Author: TiaanK
    ASL Info:    37/M/Dancing in the dark
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 22/27/28
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Stormdots
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    I take a deep breath and let it all in
    There's a storm raging violently
    Rolling thunder warns of the fear it brings,
    blinding lightning flashes misery
    But for once I'm not going to run; I'm not going to hide
    I feel calm and secure with you by my side

    I hold my breath so as not to shout
    The storm reminds that it's still right here
    Howling winds whisper of doubt,
    and the dust in my eyes cause a million tears
    But for once I'm not buckling, I take my stand
    You're next to me, holding my hand

    I sigh deeply and let it all out
    The storm is at its worst; I'm sure
    Raindrops fall like those I have to live without,
    and the cold cuts like the pain I have to endure
    But for once I feel as though I can win this fight
    You squeeze my hand just to say it will be alright

    I'm breathing easy and relieved
    The storm has passed and I still feel you
    The brightness of your smile hints of what we've achieved,
    and your eyes remind me that the sky is once again blue
    I've learned a lesson; cast it in stone:
    No one can weather the storm on their own

    - Tiaan Koekemoer 2010




    Submitted on 2011-04-20 06:54:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this is beautiful. thank you for sharing it with us.
    | Posted on 2011-04-20 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]


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