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Submission Name: Lost It All For Saitin dots

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Author:	MyPeriodical
Elite Ratio:	2.82 - 87/83/115
Words:	39

Class/Type:	Poetry/
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Out of boredom -_-'

Lost It All For Saitin dots

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Burn your wishes
Burn your hope!

Live with the despair,
you have no home!

Your faith has no use,
leave it behind.

See your thoughts are nothing
by the Devil you've become one of the blind!

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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