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    dots Submission Name: Lost It All For Saitindots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    16/male/spirit
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 116/170/202
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       Out of boredom -_-'


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    dotsLost It All For Saitindots
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    Burn your wishes
    Burn your hope!

    Live with the despair,
    you have no home!

    Your faith has no use,
    leave it behind.

    See your thoughts are nothing
    by the Devil you've become one of the blind!




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