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    dots Submission Name: Ironydots
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    Author: locutus
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 29/34/35
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIronydots
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    Ismael walks around with this suit case,
    Does not know who it belongs to, hell it looks good.
    smiles at peoples winks at the kids.
    All the people greet him, his card is always accepted.
    "Smells like american money" the rest like curry.
    Sits at the best, is treated like a king,
    His suit case stands the rest in ruins.




    Submitted on 2011-04-21 00:47:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      AngelRage4.... Muhammed.... Is this you?
    | Posted on 2011-05-28 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      carrying a bomb in his suitcase...so unassuming...and then pow...

    a martyr for the cause...so be it.
    | Posted on 2011-04-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like a torn out piece of a story of some kind.
    | Posted on 2011-04-21 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]


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