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    dots Submission Name: When Darkness Fallsdots

    Author: TiaanK
    ASL Info:    37/M/Dancing in the dark
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 22/27/28
    Words: 254
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Dedicated to those fighting depression, and in memory of those who lost.

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    dotsWhen Darkness Fallsdots

    Walking across this field so dark,
    shards of broken dreams slash at my feet
    My heart beats a heartbeat away from defeat,
    and these tired bones resonate a painful echo,
    of the loved ones who had to go

    Walking across this field so lonely,
    I see faces everywhere but not a soul in sight
    My weary legs wander away from the light
    and these old, pale hands warn through it's shivering,
    of a soul that is about to stop living

    Walking across this field so empty,
    the wind whistles a song of losing hope
    A noose of strain tightens around my throat
    and these burning lungs battle to breathe,
    as I try to regain faith in what I once believed

    Walking across this field so cold
    Losing touch; like a touch of frostbite,
    all frozen and numb from this long winter night
    These veins are pumping dry as ice
    Where are you oh Lord, oh Mary, Oh Christ?

    Walking across this field so dead,
    here where nothing survives, I've made a home
    Here where no one should walk, I walk alone
    These weak knees finally befriend the ground,
    and all goes dark, no turning around

    On my knees in the field of my dreams
    My lost eyes lost in this pitch black daze,
    when a single ray of sunlight breaks my gaze
    You see, for those in darkness, just one is a lot
    Sometimes it's more than enough to help you get up

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      Hi RaainT. This is very deep and very good poetry.
    I can actually visualize the words in its essence of Faith not lost.
    There will always be a Ray of Hope for those that believe in themselves to believe in life and the Creator. of It all.

    Well done. Joachim
    | Posted on 2011-07-15 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]

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