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    dots Submission Name: My Days...dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Rant/Satire
    Total Views: 419
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsMy Days...dots
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    The sun is rising a brand new day lies ahead
    Therefore new challenges i will soon face
    More decision I will soon have to make
    Several obstacles I will soon over come

    With each new day I face,
    I face these things as well
    Once upon a time life was simple and nonchalant
    However this is no longer the case

    Choices are to be made
    Decision I will need to be made
    As well as the effort I am willing to put forth...
    Will determine the outcome of each and everything I face during this brand new day ahead of me




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      I hadn't left you a note for quite a while Jackie, so wanted to drop by and say hello, and see what you've been up to.

    I've always been impressed by how hard you work, and by your ambition to succeed, which is to say I'm proud of you pretty lady!

    This just sums up the start of a new day so well:

    "The sun is rising a brand new day lies ahead
    Therefore new challenges i will soon face
    More decisions I will soon have to make
    Several obstacles I will soon over come"

    The great Earl Nightingale commented in his book "The Strangest Secret" ..."you become what you think about....all day long". Let your thoughts be positive ones; visualize the success that your charm and hard work and deserving efforts will lead you to!!

    You go, gal!!
    | Posted on 2011-04-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      A very well written poem on an important subject.
    Country singer George Jones has a song about The choices in his life and the mistakes made and corrected. We each have those choices, how we choose, determins the outcome and how much happiness we have in our lives.
    | Posted on 2011-04-24 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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