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    dots Submission Name: LOVE EFFECTSdots
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    Author: kiddrock
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    Words: 429
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I look at you with a a small smile you look away slowly and i feel like an idiot then you turn slowly and you walk towards me so slowly it looks like time has froze when you get half way i start to get a little scared when you get three-quarters my blood rush threw my head like cars on a raceway when you reach me i start to get twittery you grab a rose from behind me and place it in my hand slowly and i look at you with a smile and when i reach for you you get a little scared but then you notice i was just grabbing a beautiful butterfly that looked like a pretty angel flying threw the air i tell you to shut your eyes when you open them you will be amazed after 4 seconds you open your eyes and we are riding the butterfly and you freak and hold on to me with a tight grip then you feel safe when i put my arms around you then you lean in for a kiss and we kiss almost the whole ride when we stop the sun is seting and the with its last gimour it shines upon your beatful face we watch it for 10 minutes but it felt like yrs when the sun goes down finally the beautiful moon comes out from behind the dark navy-blue clouds when it does your face lights up and i look at you with a smile that only would make you feel loved when we finally get off the butterfly and i help you down and the butterfly turns into a tent just for you and me then music starts playing and we slowly dance the night away and with the last moment of my life you and me kiss then i pass you fall to your knees and start to cry with that beautiful flower still in your hand your one of your tears hit it and all of a sudden behind you i appear leaning against the soft butterflys wing and you get up and run over and hug me and the moon disappears and we kiss for ever and ever and when we die we walked threw the gates of heavan and Lord Jesus Christ with opens arms hugs us and we look at each other and then God lets go of us and he said you two go have fun then we go up to saturn and damce around it for etirnety and thats were our storie ends!




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