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    dots Submission Name: End of My Ropedots
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    Author: chrls
    ASL Info:    43/m/louisiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 43/56/16
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsEnd of My Ropedots
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    In my life things are changing so fast I wonder where it's taking me.
    If tomorrow comes, will tomorrow last? I guess it's not for me to see.

    Questions, no answers.
    Will I ever know?

    I've come to the end of my rope. If someone can save me; do it now.
    I've finally come to the end of my rope. I just can't take it no more.

    Invaded from outside, for better or worse. It's made a mark on me.
    Was it my fault? Did I cause all the pain? Or should my conscience be free.

    Questions, no answers.
    Will I ever know?

    I've come to the end of my rope. If someone can save me; do it now.
    I've finally come to the end of my rope. I just can't take it no more.

    Things that I've done; I'm not the man I once was. Life's had it's way with me.
    Can I go on; forget things that are gone?
    Life's not how it used to be.

    Questions, no answers.
    When will I ever know?

    I've come to the end of my rope. If someone can save me; do it now.
    I've finally come to the end of my rope. I just can't take it no more.




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      Was it my fault? Did i cause all the pain? Those are questions i ask too. Am i the one messing this life up?
    Life sure has had its way, but its not too late to make stepping stones from the stumbling blocks.
    Good write!
    | Posted on 2011-04-23 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]
      This could make good song lyrics. I think most of the world could relate, we're all at the end of our ropes too;
    In need of someone to save us. This is the third poem of yours I've read, I like your writing style.

    Love of Christ,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2011-04-22 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      A sad sitiuation to find ones self in.
    I read an answer for this very thing.
    'When you find yourself at the end of the rope, TIE A KNOT and start climbing to the top. "
    Another is, Tie your shoe laces, straighten your tie, square your shoulders, and charge towards the future, don't look back, for you may stumble and fall.
    | Posted on 2011-04-22 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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