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    dots Submission Name: My Lovedots
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    Author: chrls
    ASL Info:    43/m/louisiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 43/56/16
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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    dotsMy Lovedots
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    Oh my love.
    Each moment is as painful as the one before.
    I just want to hold you tight.
    I just want to spend the night with you.

    Oh my darling.
    It seems a millions years have passed since I have seen your face.
    I just need to be with you.
    I need you to help me make it through the night.

    You know I love you and nothing can ever take that away.

    Oh my dearest one.
    If I could fly I'd be right there by your side.
    My love is growing stronger now and I know I'll be with you somehow, again.

    Oh my angel.
    You have my heart and I've given you my very soul.
    Just remember that I love you so.
    There is nothing more you need to know, now.

    You know I love you and nothing can ever take that away.
    You know I love you and nothing can ever take that away.




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