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    dots Submission Name: our futuredots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsour futuredots
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    i turned the page
    i learned to subdue the rage
    you cant cage me anymore
    ive walked down to many streets
    for me to ever call that place home
    my hearts been open from the start
    why would i close it when you need it most
    i thought your love was a sickness
    thought it was going to tear me apart
    but the minute that your gone
    im crying out for you
    i thought it was my weakness
    but in reality it was my strength
    showing me just how much i could put up with
    and i knew that you were going to be my great love
    my only love
    you learned and so did i
    that our boundaries arent meant to be pushed
    and we bothed realized how much we loved eachother
    we let go of the past
    and our future looks so glorious.




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      i am so happy for you. now puff a dandelion nd wish upon each flying sliver.

    from scardnscared to something very very sacred...
    | Posted on 2011-04-26 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]


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