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our future

Author: scardnscared
ASL Info:    25/ DFW
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Words: 145
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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our future

i turned the page
i learned to subdue the rage
you cant cage me anymore
ive walked down to many streets
for me to ever call that place home
my hearts been open from the start
why would i close it when you need it most
i thought your love was a sickness
thought it was going to tear me apart
but the minute that your gone
im crying out for you
i thought it was my weakness
but in reality it was my strength
showing me just how much i could put up with
and i knew that you were going to be my great love
my only love
you learned and so did i
that our boundaries arent meant to be pushed
and we bothed realized how much we loved eachother
we let go of the past
and our future looks so glorious.

Submitted on 2011-04-24 11:39:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i am so happy for you. now puff a dandelion nd wish upon each flying sliver.

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