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    Author: skinnydrew
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 5/8/11
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I will pick you up when your weak
    Give you balance when you can't stand
    Help you through the tough times
    If just by holding my hand

    Show new ways of life
    And challenges to come
    Yet you put me aside
    And now you are gone

    To use me when needed
    And forgotten when not
    Cast aside like garbage
    Waiting to rot

    A crutch to move on
    Bit that time is now
    I am forgotten and lost
    I can only ask how?

    Things were perfect
    Just the way they were.
    How can I get up
    When I am so hurt

    You were my friend and companion
    The one I could trust.
    Now who do I turn to?
    Where is my crutch?






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