Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: untitleddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: skinnydrew
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 5/8/11
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 393
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 652



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsuntitleddots
    -------------------------------------------


    My mind just wanders
    Will it ever stand still
    My thoughts are uncontrollable
    Like a dream, but its real
    Why do I try
    When no one else does
    Why do I care
    When there is no love.
    I try to be happy
    Even when all is bad
    I want you to be happy
    To never be sad.
    I will try my hardest
    I can promise you that
    But I have to have that chance
    To prove I'm not bad.
    For I could be the one
    The one in your dreams
    I know it is tough.
    I know what you seek.
    I could have made you happy
    I would be all that you need.




    Submitted on 2011-04-24 17:49:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    190566

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Dream written by closetpoet
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Live In Between written by teika5
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    The World written by jjd
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry