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    Author: skinnydrew
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 5/8/11
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    My mind just wanders
    Will it ever stand still
    My thoughts are uncontrollable
    Like a dream, but its real
    Why do I try
    When no one else does
    Why do I care
    When there is no love.
    I try to be happy
    Even when all is bad
    I want you to be happy
    To never be sad.
    I will try my hardest
    I can promise you that
    But I have to have that chance
    To prove I'm not bad.
    For I could be the one
    The one in your dreams
    I know it is tough.
    I know what you seek.
    I could have made you happy
    I would be all that you need.




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