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    Author: skinnydrew
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 5/8/11
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    The world is so evil
    So blind to difference and change
    Always must give in order to receive
    I gave everything I had
    Yet I have not received
    But I sit and i wait
    In hopes that one day it will change
    But as I grow older
    That hope starts to fade
    I'll set an example
    A positive role.
    Maybe it will help
    Maybe it won't
    But to just give up
    Would not suffice
    I will not be the one to waste my life





    Submitted on 2011-04-24 17:58:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      we live in this big world but our individual lives are our own personal worlds... we make our personal worlds a good place by setting good examples..that's true.

    Wecan't wait for the world to make things better, we must make the move for ourselves and for others.
    nice!
    | Posted on 2011-04-25 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]


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