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    dots Submission Name: For the unlawfully departeddots
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    Author: silentpoison
    ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204/259/118
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 438
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 280



    Description:
       For a dear friend.


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    dotsFor the unlawfully departeddots
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    We are

    Chaos incarnate

    Pain and Panic

    nipping hades heels

    forged in

    indescribable pandemonium

    apart we are lost

    together we thrive

    in a llife of entropy




    Submitted on 2011-04-26 12:36:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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