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Submission Name: For the unlawfully departed dots

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Author:	silentpoison
ASL Info:	22/F/Teh Shire
Elite Ratio:	2.67 - 204/259/118
Words:	35

Class/Type:	Poetry/Friendship
Total Views:	438
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	280

Description:
For a dear friend.

For the unlawfully departed dots

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We are

Chaos incarnate

Pain and Panic

nipping hades heels

forged in

indescribable pandemonium

apart we are lost

together we thrive

in a llife of entropy

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.