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For the unlawfully departed


Author: silentpoison
ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204 /259 /118
Words: 35
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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For a dear friend.


For the unlawfully departed



We are

Chaos incarnate

Pain and Panic

nipping hades heels

forged in

indescribable pandemonium

apart we are lost

together we thrive

in a llife of entropy




Submitted on 2011-04-26 12:36:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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