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    dots Submission Name: Willful Blindnessdots
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    Author: C. Starr
    ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130/196/68
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1008
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 401



    Description:
       Written 4/27/11 @ 3:48 am Phoenix AZ


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    dotsWillful Blindnessdots
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    Money Burns...
    Looks Fade...
    Prices are paid...
    Now heads turn...
    You think you'll remain ingrained in wealth...
    You think vanity equals health ?!
    You'll be ashamed when you find,
    That all your money will only blind.
    Hide you from the lies which confine you & remind you of what binds you to the dollar which defines you.




    Submitted on 2011-04-27 06:08:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      cool cool. makes me think pennywise. like a snippet of very rhythmic punk lyrics. def gotta agree with the message.
    | Posted on 2011-04-27 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      good looks and money do not protect us from aging or pain...just ask Oedipus Rex..and Iokasta....

    well said...and the in-line rhyme propels the excellent rhythm of this straight ahead gem.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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