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Forget Me

Author: TheInvisible
ASL Info:    22/f/The Valley of Doom
Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 51 /55 /37
Words: 117
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Forget Me

Forget me.
I guess that's what you should've done,
I am,
after all,
completely worthless to you.
Or some hateful bitch.
Somedays you make me feel like I can't do anything right.
Today was one of those days,
and even now I'm trying not to cry,
but it's no use,
because I know when I lay my head on that pillow that I'll shed a tear because of you,
and you know what?
I don't want to.
You hurt me and you don't even know it,
if you do you sure as hell don't care.
So just forget about me,
I'll disappear like I've always done,
and you won't miss me,
because you don't care.

Submitted on 2011-04-28 03:03:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  a break up may be like a free fall. both sides forget or it is more likely that they pretend to forget.

the thing is... it should not be a free fall even if you have to helplessly claw the sky.

try to count... how many times you just avoided him, changed your path so it may not cross with his, kept on waiting that he will call first, or chatted with him as 'invisible' pseudoidentity... and then wondered why he talked so lovingly with you... oh yes, because he has forgotten you, right?

life is confounding, dear

may be he has the same sentiments as you have...

i wish the best for you, just ask your heart, that little thingy knows all.

as i read your poem, i cant believe that it was an ordinary kind of love, it should not end like this.
| Posted on 2011-04-28 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]

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