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    dots Submission Name: steameddots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    everyman i hold in my arms
    is just another notch on my post
    and everytime i scream
    its always your name in the back of my mind
    and no one forgets you
    but god knows we've all tried
    and sometimes nothing makes sense
    and i try to iron out the kinks in my life
    but i still think back to that one memory
    were you said i would never be good enough
    well i guess ive proved myself
    cause ive thrown myself in every mans arms
    just so i can say that they all want me
    but the numbers they rack up
    and my self esteem sometimes falls
    cause i can see the desire
    never the love
    shining in their eyes
    so how can i back track
    how can i get back to that first mistake
    .. i cant
    and it kills me cause i wish i could do it differently
    i wish i didnt do it at all
    i should of known that you only said those things
    cause deep inside you loved me
    and didnt want to see me go
    but you've got a horribly fucking wrong way
    of loving me.




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      Men huh! They turn life into a botched up crossword and then brag about it. sorry, i am just angry.

    And it may be dangerous because i am alone with my strong, capricious anger.

    Thanks for sharing this really meaningful poem.
    | Posted on 2011-06-02 00:00:00 | by Kaddish | [ Reply to This ]
      really tells the effects words have on us. especially when it comes from someone close so many times. it stays in our memories and changes the way we see ourselves and view life. yeah, most times, women feel a little wanted and a little powerful when they're with men who desperately want their bodies. but that's all they want, their bodies.
    | Posted on 2011-04-29 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]


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