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Evolve Already!

Author: Runes
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Evolve Already!

You is one of them men we call a Bitch Niggah, boo...
You know the type, don't ya? Would stab his mama
and steal her change purse to buy gum and an 8-ball,
crack-licious and vicious like some rabid hog
that needs putting down while its tearing up
the muddy corn field...
One of those cunt-work oranges you see picking up trash
along the roadside in restraints... a Bitch Niggah
with that slave mentality that keeps you chained down
and stupid... would rather have stripes in horizontals
and vertical bars, living caged with a metal bed...
Bitch Niggah on display, baring his teeth
and screaming for Mama to buy him back home
when his dumb luck runs out...
Maybe in time your knees might finally bend,
and you'll pray yourself into becoming a real
Black Man.

Submitted on 2011-04-30 02:28:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  What exactly be a real Black man? What make him real and what make him black? It may be a bit of a cliché, but to a man, skin tone don't mean sheeit!

Invite me along to your next cross burning out in the sticks. I'll bring a bucket of chicken, a watermelon, some corn bread and a bunch of grape soda. And I will paint my face caramel brown. That way, they won't know whether to scream NIGGER or WETBACK!, or know whether to curb me or make taco jokes.

Where I come from, men, lesser men, and boys all come in all ages, colors, sizes, handicaps...

Preachers, politicians, sex workers, business owners and anyone who chooses to write to convey a message, they're all con artists. Every last one of them.

See you at deh CLUB! :D
| Posted on 2011-05-02 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]
  I used to have a friend (just about the only black friend I've ever had) and we would joke with each other . "Hey you ugly black ass niger" I'd say . To which he'd reply "what do you want you white trash honky redneck ?" Then we'd laugh until the echos subsided . But this is so much more serious . When you say "[censored] niggah" you really mean it . Believe me I understand there are such people and I appreciate the way you read him the riot act . So crass , so raw , this guy better get it or he will be a "Bitch niggah" for life . As for suggesting genuflection I couldn't agree more , he definitely needs to reconstitute his attitude problems and find some relevant spiritualism . Unfortunately so many of these types are beyond redemption that I can't help wonder if the "Bitch niggah" line is going to help . Oh well , I say speak your mind . If they can't take it fu(k em !

| Posted on 2011-05-01 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
I read that first line & was like “whaaaat?!” I think it was the “Bitch Niggah, boo” because it automatically set me wondering about where the hell this poem could possibly be going.

& it builds up, in a tough love gangster sort of way. Actually, I'm not sure if that exists. I don't know much about gangsters, or how they love, but I do know some shady Sicilians. Anyhoo, but maybe you get what I'm trying to say, like you're saying “quit your [censored]in & get on with it, you're not fooling anybody” which makes me think you should absolutely be a counselor for prisons. :)

What I like about this is how daring, blatant & really, how effective the use of that “[censored] niggah” is. & overall, I don't know how I feel about the political & racial subjects you're approaching here, & that's what makes it even better.

So yes, this is awesome, & unlike anything I've yet to read on here.
| Posted on 2011-05-01 00:00:00 | by Santi | [ Reply to This ]
  oh boy, i think i know where this might have come from...

this is terse, coarse and crassly wonderful in its full blown rage...

calling out the man to be a man...own up and buy yourself a new personality instead of hiding behind the stripes...whether they be worn or your walls....

this is my new favorite from you...

| Posted on 2011-04-30 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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