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    Author: Midnight_Toker
    Elite Ratio:    0.67 - 13/232/500
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 541
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    Leave me the fuck alone!
    dont touch me and dont taste me!

    GET AS FAR AWAY AS YOU CAN!
    dont LOVE ME and DONT FACE ME!

    Im TIRED of GIVING and WASTING,
    Tiny fragments of my heart,

    Broken and ripped-treated like shit,
    Thrown away like insignificant parts,

    ill take this pain and arrange it as art,
    painted and pasted in ink,

    my SPIRIT exists with vibrant rage,
    furiously CRAZED and distinct,

    I dont give a fuck anymore what you think,

    Im FINISHED.









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