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    Author: Midnight_Toker
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    dotstireddots
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    Tired of talking-tired of listening,
    Tired of breathing-tired of existing,
    Tired of persisting-tired of having hope,
    Only to watch all hope come CRASHING DOWN when my heart is broke,

    Crushed drowned defeated and choked,
    Smothered into DISMAL remains,
    Im tired of all this FUCKING SADNESS!!
    And relentless UNENDING PAIN!

    TIRED of keeping my anger contained,
    Suppressed and sustained deep below,
    Tired of hiding my heart from the world,
    Im tired of feeling SO LOW,

    Im weak and weary but nobody knows,
    Alone with my thoughts-HOLLOW and uninspired,
    Hurt and left behind-to face the world...but im SO TIRED!


    Exhausted and torn apart.




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