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    Author: trinityfinger
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    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Misc/Fuck it all
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    To be certain of this, I must define fate and its parameters
    and how it urges to be nostalgic when hope deserts the mind.

    I must speak plainly. I must converge and not distort
    this figurative cosmopolitan sense of a seven day reversal
    of all that I've tried to combine.

    Lux, veritas, old photos pin-pricked upon my walls,
    remembrance is my flaw, heliocentric because comfort
    will never be found beneath this moon.

    By rote and mnemonics, I is the only certainty
    to believe in. Compassion and virtue
    are wild creatures too spread out

    Upon this planet to ever come together
    to a mildly satisfactory conclusion.


    03/05/11

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      this is me right now...relying on self...the only certainty is how i feel about me and how i treat it and others....

    compassion seems a thing of the past...truth a thing of the past...life has gotten different...people are different...
    nostalgia may be the only thing that keeps me sane.

    thus, i feel this.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-03 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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