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    dots Submission Name: Skittledots
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    Author: Diablo Tapitio
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 85/111/62
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsSkittledots
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    Does evryone get the itch to stray,
    or to throw everything away.
    and kill the things we hold so dear,
    and embrace the chaos as the end creeps near.

    Is everyone really that blind,
    running around like you have lost your minds.
    Chasing old images of life,
    illusions of love and ambitious strye.

    Do we all really hate ourselfs,
    so much we will crush anything for wealth.
    So much that we take it out on the earth,
    or is it just an instinct given at birth.




    Submitted on 2011-05-04 20:41:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Not everyone will crush everything for wealth but for love, most will. we always yearn to belong, to feel wanted and to bond so when we are alone we get desperate and we'll do anything to have someone love us (even if its not true love but a facade).

    and to stray, i think its an unconscious thing. we are prone to wander away from the good and vital things. we find danger exciting!
    | Posted on 2011-05-05 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah, unfortunately everyone gets this 'itch', we are all basically wild, some of us are incredibly stupid too.

    you have raised some pertinent questions here. people get bored by happiness and comfort and they find some way to ruin their lives like weed or falling in love with some unworthy or driving at a murderous speed.

    As if life's unpredictability is not an adventure enough...
    | Posted on 2011-05-05 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]


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