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    dots Submission Name: EEEK! A mouse...dots
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    Author: solararia
    ASL Info:    30/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 309/335/92
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 706
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 914



    Description:
       To my twins. My Ying and Yang. My box full of circles.


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    dotsEEEK! A mouse...dots
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    You arrived far too early…
    And brought your best friend.
    Your next moment left unpromised,
    Born with my heart in your hands.

    I love you with everything
    I never knew I had,
    You gave me just what I needed:
    You made me your Dad

    We metered our expectations, yet
    You’ve overcome so many things,
    I don’t care if you ever walk, my Kate…
    As long as you spread your wings.

    I could never describe my pride, dearest Cole,
    At seeing the man you’re growing to be….
    Our world is but a humble stage for you,
    You fill our souls with love and glee!

    What sudden epiphanies we face in the dawn,
    After all too short hours of balming repose,
    Sometimes the giddy of morning’s first breath,
    Is far sweeter than perfume of the imperial rose…





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      Wow! What a sweet poem! It is an excellent expression of fatherly affection.It is above and beyond all worldly things because your babies are not judging you, they are just soaking up the warmth of your love that is making them internally stronger.

    When they grow up, they will certainly be proud of "EEEK! A mouse...!"
    | Posted on 2011-05-13 00:00:00 | by Kaddish | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw, this is nice. I like the part about never walking, but spreading their wings. A great line.
    | Posted on 2011-05-05 00:00:00 | by Peacejoe | [ Reply to This ]


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