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    dots Submission Name: drugwritedots
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    Author: awastedsky
    ASL Info:    22/f/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 116/151/98
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Prose/Dark
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       i compulsively add introductions to the writing i submit even though it truly seems nonsensical to me.


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    dotsdrugwritedots
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    sometimes i read the words of drug addicts. the words seem like the eyes of people who i know are afflicted. dead. they are pretty writers, though. i cannot help but desire to read more. addicts seem to write their words with care. none of that leet speak, 21st century shorthand bullshit that infiltrates the internet. it's like, "i'm one rig away from being dopesick; i might as well get this fucking english language shit right." or maybe drug addicts think more than the rest of us. maybe? definitely. although drugs seem to run away with time. too fast and you can't catch either. if time goes by faster when you're high, are you really thinking as much? who the fuck cares. why did i quit smoking again?




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      this write is real...and true...and such a paradox...those with clouded, drugged up minds taking more care with our English language and words than the clear headed ones looking for short cuts...

    the drug induced state...the trip into our minds...stronger introspection? clearer maybe?

    and yes, our language is getting so trashed with the emails and texts..ugh..

    i dig this one...especially being an English teacher and all...

    :)

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      I held a poem to my head
    to stop the words from clotting
    like sfumato o'er my bed

    Just what came to mind when I read this.

    Bill
    | Posted on 2011-05-08 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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