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    dots Submission Name: Neglected, the Moonlightdots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNeglected, the Moonlightdots
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    I am your moon tonight
    I am watching over you
    And all these clusters in the sky
    Won't even let me say goodbye

    This distance seems to have expanded
    I can't touch you, I've tried
    I'll just admire your beauty
    Because you'll never need me

    Only, with all of this space
    I worry if you remember
    Of how much I care
    And that I'm always there

    I don't want to see you...
    I don't want to see you cry
    But I want to see you tonight
    Does not matter in what light

    You may think you never see me
    But I'm always with you now
    And will forever be
    You took a part of me

    In the way you comprehend
    The color green
    Or how you now feed on attention
    So many small traits, not to mention

    So in a way, a bit of me is a bit of you
    And of you is me
    So I can't say I have much regret
    Aside taking for granted and neglect

    Because we are better than we were before
    Before we exchanged these parts of ourselves...
    You were simply you
    I was just me, too




    Submitted on 2011-05-09 03:43:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i feel that the exchange at the end of this is only in the speaker's mind.

    almost like someone loving at a distance...knowing he or she will never get close enough for a real touch...just the imaginary ones of the mind...

    a love that is more infatuation and wishing...
    someone who never notices us...takes us for granted...maybe even a person who sees us as a good friend, but not a romantic relationship...

    but our feelings have grown into something else...yet, in order to stay close to that person we have to keep our feelings to ourselves...

    often happens...and that is what i see in this...

    i will be your moonlight..watch over you, protect you, be there for you...

    even if you don't notice me.


    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-09 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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