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    dots Submission Name: what makes the cowarddots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 492
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    Bytes: 668



    Description:
       just had to get it out...
    i know its short, but i was just trying to get across that even if you are branded a coward for running from your problems, theres always a reason. most people will never understand that...


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    dotswhat makes the cowarddots
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    He'll keep his mouth shut,
    and they call him an idiot.
    He'll but utters a sound,
    they say he's talking shit.
    He looks towards the ground,
    and they say he's suicidal.
    He does what they say,
    to be treated like an animal.

    He's had ENOUGH!!!
    Enough of their amusement!
    Enough of their JUDGING LOOKS!!!
    ENOUGH OF THE EMBARRASSMENT!!!!
    ...but he'll do nothing...
    That's all he's ever done.
    Instead he'll just turn,
    turn, to cowardly run...

    "say what you want,
    i cant hear you anymore"




    Submitted on 2011-05-09 03:55:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Been awhile man. Not a bad warm up. I can definitely relate to this one today. I'm sick of being treated like trash.
    Anyways good to see you're back!
    | Posted on 2011-05-09 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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