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    Author: master mind
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    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Happy
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       jus thoughts


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    lost in the thought of you.... dont know what to do but you know what its koo cause if you ask me..
    ill love at the thoughts, so im gonna let them be..
    think free of you and me... up and up to the point of world sight,
    still laughing at lastnight honey do you believe that?
    sweet woman i adored your touch, warm soul you dont have to do much.. lets see where this goes, who knows you could end up lovin me.. take my hand honey lets jus be.... free is me and love is you with the two together honey i can bring you the moon..
    nic 2011




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