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    dots Submission Name: Losing touch with lovedots
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    Author: gothicgirl
    ASL Info:    23/f/recreant world
    Elite Ratio:    3.49 - 127/111/48
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 573
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1559



    Description:
       me and my husbands relationship is an epic fail i guess!


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    dotsLosing touch with lovedots
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    I've looked into your eyes for so many years
    and all i see is hate colliding with my tears.
    Resentment holds your name
    where i was hoping some love remained
    a slow spiral into hell
    is where this relationship has fell.
    and how we really feel
    well i guess we'll never tell.
    They say its normal to have ups and downs
    but where there used to be smiles there are only frowns.
    I never wanted any of this is all you can say
    but a monster i fear is all you can see
    My heart in pieces on the floor,
    Shutting me out,
    but your the one closing the fucking door.
    I thought our love deserved one last chance
    after ever thing we've been through
    and the funny part is i actually thought you'd agree.
    all the hours we've spent wanting each other,
    now is spent running to cover.
    you've shut me out and shot me down
    but in all the yelling i still don't make a sound.
    can we ever be what we once were
    i guess no one can ever be sure.
    all your doing is playing games with my head
    but I've made it easy believing all the bullshit we've said.
    to think that i actually thought that you still cared
    but i guess all these feelings are mine to bare.
    all i can think is this the end?
    or after everything can this love mend?
    I'll hold my hand out one last time
    I hope you take it after reading this ridiculous rhyme.




    Submitted on 2011-05-09 12:32:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i loved this poem. it was dark, and angry, and relatable.
    it had a serious edge to it. i wish, however, that it had been spaced out more.
    otherwise, i thought it was perfect.
    :)
    | Posted on 2011-07-18 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]


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