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    dots Submission Name: no titl either.. lol but o well..dots

    Author: master mind
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    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Happy
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    dotsno titl either.. lol but o well..dots

    you remind me of sun light..
    together we stand, your heart in my hand,
    lost in eyes watching the beauty of the day pass by... watching your soul glow in the night sky...
    yes my dear beauty is you.....
    yes beauty is you....
    and And love is me sittin on the end of the world think bout ya mmmm.... Lookin at the stars you should be a paintin lighted up on front of mars.... Red glow, and yes we all know for sure, ur beauty is so much more than jus an art show, so baby I say this for the warmth of the world soul... Without your love to reach all.... We all fall...
    Šnic 20011

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