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Intensity


Author: Themissingshado
ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle
Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 23 /52 /32
Words: 69
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Intensity



Tonight after we talked
I can't stop thinking of you
There's something about you
that keeps me smiling
I can't figure it out...
Honestly what if I kissed you right now
What would you do
Would you back away or hold on for the sweet embrace
Take my hand
Let me now what would you do if I kissed you







Submitted on 2011-05-10 03:28:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  you wouldn't know until you do it....whoever it is is probably dyin gto be kissed by you! ;-)
| Posted on 2011-05-12 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]
  Take the chance, you only pass this way once.
| Posted on 2011-05-12 00:00:00 | by Joybell | [ Reply to This ]
  go for it.. time doesnt wait for anyone.
| Posted on 2011-05-12 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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