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    dots Submission Name: The Girl Who Carried The Devildots

    Author: TheInvisible
    ASL Info:    22/f/The Valley of Doom
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 51/55/37
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Girl Who Carried The Devildots

    She walked in silence,
    walked with rage,
    she carried an angel in her heart,
    and a demon in her head.
    God held her hand,
    and Lucifer led the way.
    He was her lover,
    and her fate,
    he whispered in her ear,
    his silver tongue teasing.
    She hoped on every word,
    every syllable.
    As she reached the black gate,
    Lucifer kissed her,
    and God looked away.

    Submitted on 2011-05-11 02:52:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love it :'(
    The emotion totally over-whelms me even though it's just so simple.
    I needed something like that, seriously.
    | Posted on 2011-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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