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    dots Submission Name: My Days and My Nightsdots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMy Days and My Nightsdots

    I wish to believe one day I will not be up late at night
    Crying into the darkness
    I will no longer feel the pain
    That has been brought upon me by another

    I wonder when this day will arrive.
    How many more years do I get to look forward to nightmares I cannot remember
    Yet, I wake others up from?
    When will these familiarized tears cease their streams upon my cheeks?

    How much longer must I pretend that all is well?
    When in reality inside I am dying
    Slowly I am due to my own demons
    as well as demons other have happily given to me
    A good candidate for post-traumatic stress disorder
    Just a bunch of words to me
    All thrown together to make you believe it is something important

    Lonely nights,
    Follow me into my dreary days,
    My depression poking and picking at me,
    No matter the amount of my strength,
    No matter my countless efforts,
    I cannot get away from it.. the... this darkness calls to me
    As does my depression
    Without one you would not have the other.
    We all come hand in hand

    I'm losing the battle all the strength I once had, no longer present
    I'm losing this fight..
    Only holding on by one hand... And hardly that..

    Submitted on 2011-05-11 05:17:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      But God has that one hand in his pretty lady, and he won't let go or leave you alone...

    some of us are tested more than others, and it will develop more character and one day give you greater wisdom and empathy than what could have come about without the hardship that caused it..

    The brightest diamonds are forged from the hottest fires....

    and you are a diamond among us!
    | Posted on 2011-05-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This has made me so sad, i don't know what to say. Really touching.
    | Posted on 2011-05-18 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]

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