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    dots Submission Name: Just In Casedots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsJust In Casedots
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    When I was young,
    I was cautious and prepared,
    Everything seemed so fun,
    Yet I lived so fast,
    And unaware.

    I thought I had the globe,
    At my command,
    Like an unhappy clone,
    I knew it was a sign
    To become a man.

    Now that I know,
    I just laugh at my defeats,
    Just in case though,
    God I happen to meet.




    Submitted on 2011-05-12 00:31:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i felt like that when i was younger too.. well not the man part but the whole i own the world feeling.. it really does show you just how young and naive we were.. good write.
    | Posted on 2011-05-12 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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