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The path I walk on is a glass one
One wrong turn can't be taken back
It shatters the floor as if shot by a gun
Then the way ahead looks unclear
As the path rebuilds itself anew
I tread more cautious then the last
But the choices are to be made
Only this time are made from fear
Afraid the glass will break again
Afraid I will start over from the beginning
Afraid my choices will hurt my friends
Just afraid that my end is near
This path isnt as clear as it was
As if walking on a steamed mirror
I see a faint reflection of myself
My heart nearly breaks as I shed a tear
My world keep changing as I continue
I see where its going now
I know what i must do
The path is smooth and starts to clear.
I can see my path ahead now
My head is high and won't go down
I changed my sights for good
I will never look to the rear
My past is gone for good
For I no longer walk on a pane of glass
I am where I am supposed to be
I have nowhere to go I'm already here.
Submitted on 2011-05-12 13:49:44
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