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    Author: skinnydrew
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 5/8/11
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    The path I walk on is a glass one
    One wrong turn can't be taken back
    It shatters the floor as if shot by a gun
    Then the way ahead looks unclear

    As the path rebuilds itself anew
    I tread more cautious then the last
    But the choices are to be made
    Only this time are made from fear

    Afraid the glass will break again
    Afraid I will start over from the beginning
    Afraid my choices will hurt my friends
    Just afraid that my end is near

    This path isnt as clear as it was
    As if walking on a steamed mirror
    I see a faint reflection of myself
    My heart nearly breaks as I shed a tear

    My world keep changing as I continue
    I see where its going now
    I know what i must do
    The path is smooth and starts to clear.

    I can see my path ahead now
    My head is high and won't go down
    I changed my sights for good
    I will never look to the rear

    My past is gone for good
    For I no longer walk on a pane of glass
    I am where I am supposed to be
    I have nowhere to go I'm already here.




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