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    Author: orpheus
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 188/165/57
    Words: 421
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 724
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 2560



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       Written to Jay Z psa black albumn


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    I put that X
    On my chest like a hot cross bun
    Break bread
    drink the red before I get the job done
    Im in a war
    And fighting on the side of Gods Son
    Then return to the source
    Cause here there once was love
    But no more
    Its sadness in the chalice
    Madness on the rampage
    This rappers on a black stage
    The damage isnt just co-lateral
    Satan doesnt just want the tusks
    He wants the whole animal
    His greatest lie believed
    that he doesnt exist
    Then whos in hell behind the desk man
    Running the shit?
    If this is salt on your wounds
    Then Im rubbing it in
    It may hurt but its a cure
    So Ill double the hit!
    Man Im a soldier
    and Im back from the dead
    I flak-jacket black magic
    With the words that Ive read
    Have my demons exorcised
    jumping like jack rabbits
    Drop their butts in the dust
    just like a bad habit

    -interlude-
    Now before I finish let me just say that I did not come here to show out, I did not come here to impress you, because to tell you the truth when I leave here im gone and I dont care what you think about me, but just remember when it hits the fan brother whether its next year, ten years or twenty years from now, youll never be able to say these brothers lied to you jack


    Sobering thoughts
    For every soul thats in this war
    Fighting for the righteous cause
    Its getting colder than before
    Keep the fire in your heart lit
    And liar in the dark
    Give with the right hand
    Without the left knowing what its for!
    Im not scared of any opponent
    Whats more
    Im prepared with many components
    My pen is my sword
    Writing pad is my shield
    Grammar the hammer of Thor
    Striking like lightning
    Minds of non believers scorched
    Spiritual syllables
    In metaphysical form
    Straight from the horses jaw literal
    Like hooves kicking down the door
    Splitting the boards to splinters
    Tiws day of battle I was born
    Ready to saddle up and head on out
    Whenever Im called
    Lord please forgive me
    For all the sins that Ive committed
    Or the past equals the future
    Like its already been written
    Fear of the Lord
    Is the beginning of wisdom
    I hear the cheers as reward
    I start grinning and listen to it all




    Submitted on 2011-05-12 15:18:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great, another warrior for RIGHT and GOD.
    There may be those whoes wounds will burn from all the salt of truth, but those convinced there is NO GOD, will not feel the sword until too late.
    Keep the faith !!
    | Posted on 2011-05-12 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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