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    dots Submission Name: 20th Century Monsters dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 428
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    The sleeping smile following your eyes
    Hidden in the neon
    Nightglows entertainment tissues of silence screams
    The electrical baubles
    Of your dreams

    Still it lingers
    The sleepless inside your eyes
    Too many shadows
    To see the light
    Too much darkness
    So much deception inside the lies

    Who there lurks behind the dangerous tears
    The denial a tourniquet of comfort
    No one ever hears
    A mortuary of murdered children
    Glitters beguilement in the starvation of our souls

    As we turn to hear the palpable echoes
    Dishonesty from the lips of saviours
    Edited by the scriptures
    Of those who’s religion is our control

    Desperately enchanted by meaningless, gratuitous
    Fashion victim worlds
    Labels us in a cost of blood
    And freedoms illusion
    Have measured your worth
    By what ever you cannot afford

    And while these 20th Century Monsters
    Rule your globe
    A blue bloodline
    With elitist strings on puppet politicians
    Beat the sheep to continuously bleat
    The agenda of their indoctrination

    The sleepless smile from the inkwells of your eyes
    Camouflaged by neon
    Night demons entertainment in a tissue of silence, screams
    The electrical baubles
    Of your dreams
    And every new born human
    Is born beneath
    The colours of its decade
    The flying flags of isolation
    People torn apart
    In a planetary struggle for survival
    Each father, mother and their children
    Fooled by the thieves
    Who stole our world
    As we sink into the quicksand of their sickness
    Those parasites who lay claim
    To our souls

    With each and every generation
    Nothing more than a support mechanism
    To provide the wealth and luxury
    Of those parasitical people
    Who thrive and feed
    Off of our slavery

    Design the wars
    Design the death
    Design the life you have left
    Everything individual
    They told you, you would want
    Every dream you’ll ever need
    Transported across the microwaves
    Of your T.V

    And every belief is a lie
    Every truth a demon behind your eyes
    Hidden in the neon
    While night clowns entertain
    The tissues of silence
    Screaming the celestial baubles
    Of your lives
    Too many shadows
    To see the light
    Too much darkness
    So much deception inside all the lies

    All the ways in which we are fooled
    What you worship
    Is how you are ruled

    In the battalions of chains
    And the fear of centuries
    Though we live and breathe
    We mean nothing to them
    At all

    All the ways in which you are fooled
    What you worship
    Is how you are ruled




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