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    dots Submission Name: Tasty Snackdots
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    Author: nicodemous
    ASL Info:    7-5-82/M/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    5.58 - 283/221/121
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Haiku/Love
    Total Views: 629
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 100



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    dotsTasty Snackdots
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    Kisses much like chips

    I can never take just one

    Snacking on your lips




    Submitted on 2011-05-14 17:58:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Worthy of sharing with someone you love!
    | Posted on 2011-05-15 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      we just keep going back for more...double dipping..and i guess with kissing, that's okay...

    this caused a smile!

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-14 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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