This has such great energy. The use of "cosmic astigmatic" is quite complex but I found it well supported here, & in such a small space. I'm a fan of short poems, so that appealed to me even more.
The repetition of "our shoulders bump" is great too, & how it that first "bump" is followed by a reaction to the touch, the thoughts & feelings that happen from that bump to the next, if that makes any sense. & I like the ordinary quality of "you stun me every time" after some heavier phrasing. Keeps it grounded, adhered, & then off to the cosmos again.