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    dots Submission Name: When all else fails.dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 884
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 584



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    dotsWhen all else fails.dots
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    when all else fails,
    when there is no way out.
    when your back is against the wall
    and you can't even shout.

    when your heart is breaking
    when you fall down
    when you watch someone else succeed,
    and you are going back around.

    when you try your hardest
    when you feel too small
    that's when you stand back up
    you show them all

    you show that you are strong
    that nobody can effect you
    when all else fails
    just being yourself is all you can do.




    Submitted on 2011-05-15 23:25:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice one, well rhymed :)
    | Posted on 2011-05-16 00:00:00 | by klikko | [ Reply to This ]


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