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    dots Submission Name: words ill never forget....dots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 456
    Average Vote:    2.0000
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    dotswords ill never forget....dots
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    J'ai revee a toi, hier soir. J'ai essayee de penser a autres choses. Mais, tu voit, tu es toujours dans mes pensees. Mais bon, la vie est ce qu'elle est. Il est impossible de t'oublier, toi. Comme il est impossible d'etre avec toi. Au moins, on aura toujours notre amitie




    Submitted on 2011-05-16 09:49:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't know, is this French and what was it about:
    | Posted on 2011-05-17 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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