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    dots Submission Name: Only Questiondots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 396
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    Description:
       Self realization about how you need to love yourself to really fight temptation.


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    Some people drink away their concerns,
    Others just smoke it away,
    Sometimes the lesson is learned,
    Just so we can move on with our day.

    If I drank my concerns,
    I would lack results,
    And no earns,
    Smoking them away,
    Is an insult,
    Not coming to any terms.

    My only question is though,
    If I can't do the above,
    Only shows,
    That to overcome failure,
    Man needs to see
    What love really bestows.




    Submitted on 2011-05-17 22:59:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very good answer to the question.
    Love for GOD, a spouse , parent or friend can, indeed give worth to ones days.
    A Very good poem and you answered the question well.
    | Posted on 2011-05-18 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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