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Author:	Latin King
ASL Info:	31/M/Los Angeles
Elite Ratio:	2.39 - 104/232/145
Words:	75

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	362
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	513

Description:
Self realization about how you need to love yourself to really fight temptation.

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Some people drink away their concerns,
Others just smoke it away,
Sometimes the lesson is learned,
Just so we can move on with our day.

If I drank my concerns,
I would lack results,
And no earns,
Smoking them away,
Is an insult,
Not coming to any terms.

My only question is though,
If I can't do the above,
Only shows,
That to overcome failure,
Man needs to see
What love really bestows.

Submitted on 2011-05-17 22:59:52 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Very good answer to the question.
Love for GOD, a spouse , parent or friend can, indeed give worth to ones days.
A Very good poem and you answered the question well.
| Posted on 2011-05-18 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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