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    dots Submission Name: Mr. Pdots
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    Author: Kaddish
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 53/41/18
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
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    dotsMr. Pdots
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    He is Mr. Perfect who does everthing artistically. He drives as if he is smoothing down the road but right now it seems we have forgotten the way. Yes, it is the third time we have whizzed past the same couple of moribund windmills and ugly craggy rocks. I do not mind though. I just want to tell him that he is looking like a cute pigeon with a perpetual frown , but i wont

    Who wants to be kicked off in the middle of nowhere !




    Submitted on 2011-05-18 01:29:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice; enjoyed.
    | Posted on 2011-05-19 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]
      "A cute pigeon with a perpetual frown" that just kills me . Ha Ha Ha , Ho Ho Ho . Really thats sooo funny .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-05-19 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      i remember one time riding with a dear friend of mine...he was drunk..i didn't think he was when we got into the car..i thought i was way worse off than he....but i was wrong...he was driving about 100 miles an hour down the highway...and rather than say anything to him...like "slow down" or "pull over" or just "stooooopppppppp" i felt it best to be quiet and pray.

    we made it safely back to the house where he proceeded to immediately pass out...

    sometimes best to leave well enough alone..especially with guys who think they are never lost, and are perfect..
    not sure how else to respond to this..it is a smile...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-18 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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